Under the bed

WALT We are learning to use descriptive vocab in our writing.

This is work I have written myself. It is still a work in progress.

I was in my bed at night. Until I heard a 

loud bang. So I looked under my bed I 

got frighted. It is a monster it looked 

like 

a hairy, monster it was green, scary he 

had 10 eyes his eyes was red us blared. 

The monsther was scraching on my 

floor. I then ran in my mums room I taled 

her. Wathtever you are dreming she  

said. She came in my room. The monster 

was hiding in all my teddys and toys under 

my bed i saw it but not my mum. Next 

morning she said you are griedin but but 

but but what. Ther is a monster will then 

you are being groined intal I see the 

monster. Oh no it is night when the 

monster cames out. Tack a big brith. Ok i 

have a plan i am going to hante for the 

monster. Get my ger on. Face my fher.

Hoya yay I got it lets so mum. Mum I got 

the monster. What thats a tedey. NO! 

The monster said I need to benk oh NO! 

Ok it blek so it is trhow mum thart you 

are un grond.

Have you made up a Under the bed story if you have tall me.?

The hard bit was theking what to ritte